Help the poor!!!

The government leaders were compassionate/kind in the 60’s is precis.I said it was precis because during this time the government want and did help the poor united states citizens by creating programs like food stamps, so they can try to get ahead. The big idea is that the president Johnson legislation’s use money  wisely. The theme to consider when thinking about this topic are economies and change.For example the united states help a big portion of the their poor people and they didn’t even give a little they gave over $1 billion dollars in schools and made sure they could get food and have medical care which really help the poor people even some today. Image result for Help the poor!!!For instance on lines 8-9 state ” The great society establish medicare and medicaid which provide health care to the poor and to the elderly.However, these programs took a lot of money from working class people and the wealthy.For instance, line 10 states”….$ 1 billion in Federal funding…. .This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.In conclusion, we see a major focus on economies and  change. I picked this particular theme because the government had to take money form the united states to give to these programs that change a lot of peoples lives in the 1960’s.This was important because it helps us to understand the about  the present better because we still have them now in 2018 and they still help over a million people every day. Perhaps people  should look at a page in president Johnson’s book. 

 

19 thoughts on “Help the poor!!!

  1. Good job! I rate your work a 2 out of 3 . I mainly focused on this statement ,”This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.”This statement gave me a good understanding of your perspective , and I totally agree with you on this President Johnson did provide these programs for the poor and elderly . Also your picture does connect with your essay . Next time , you should check your grammar and proff read your essay but honestly great job! Why do you think these programs still exist today in 2018?

  2. Great job!! i really loved the paragraph. Great detail! really explain how the 60s was and how they assisted the poor by passing the Food Stamp act of 1964. The sentence i focused on is “during this time the government want and did help the poor united states citizens by creating programs like food stamps, so they can try to get ahead” because the what is was all about, making sure the citizens of America were up to part with their finances and medicare. This allows us to see that they government did concern a little about the citizens. I rate your work a 2 out of 3 because there were slight mistakes but we are human we are going to make mistakes . Just make sure you what your talking about and you know how to word it together, Also check your spelling. Do you think the government helped the poor because they cared or because they were focused on the views of others?

  3. Very good job on your article!! The sentence I focused “Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s”. I chose that because that what people do today build programs to help students and jobs as well. Something to work on in the future is to like find words to short your sentence like instead of saying “want and did”, could have said wanted. The picture kind of in the corner and its small but its okay. I rate your work 2 out of 3. Have you thought about making programs one day?

  4. Wonderful Job ! I rate your work a 2 out of 3 just because you forgot to check for spelling mistakes other then that your work is great. I mainly focused on the sentence, “This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.” The reason I focused on this sentence is because, it pops out to the readers and show how the government help out the poor in the great society in the 1960s. Your picture really stand out to me and bring out your essay because, it says how the society can do more to help out the poor that’s really in need of help. Would you help out the poor in the 1960s if you were in their position ?

  5. Great work! I focused on “This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s”. It grabbed my attention because I can relate with your statement. This post made me feel like we have the same thoughts about president Johnson’s legislation. I really don’t have any suggestions because I think you did an excellent job, the only thing is your hammer but everything else is good. I rate you a 3/3 because I like liked how you explained everything. My question is what do you think today’s society would be if president Johnson wouldn’t helped the people with these problems?

  6. Cool!!! I focused on this “This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.” I feel like programs were a big help. Your work made me feel like you were lazy. I say this because the way you typed your sentence and the format. I suggest you space out your words. I rated your work a 1. Do you think other presidents should use there money wisely? Are there more people who help like president Johnson?

  7. Good work! I focused on the sentence “it was precis because during this time the government want and did help the poor united states citizens by creating programs like food stamps. This allows us to see that the citizens created a program like food stamps. I like how you explained everything, You used so much textual evidence and explained everything very well. My question is why you use this picture as you background? and if you were in this situation what would you have done?

  8. good! i focus on the sentence ” because during this time the government want and did help the poor united states citizens by creating programs like food stamps, so they can try to get ahead.” i agree i think your paper was good you should focus on reading more. i give you a 2 in getting more information . but why did you think the government was poor ?

  9. Awesome Post! I focused on the sentence,”This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.” I totally agree with your opinion. Your post made me feel as I could relate to your opinion because I said similar things in my essay. In the future i suggest you go back and double check for errors. Overall I rated your post 3 out of 3. If President Johnson ran for president again, would you vote for him?

  10. Great post! “This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.” this grabbed my attention because this made me understand your point of view based on the topic. This made me feel like you really understood that people needed help. I suggest you work on correctly applying your picture. What would you done differently?

  11. You did great! I really focused on this sentence “This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.” I agree with what you said in that sentence because the Presidents legislation had many programs that helped the poor. This post let me know that the 1960s were a great time for the poor community. In the future I hope you add in more information to go with what you are trying to explain but overall you did well. I rated your work a 3 out of 3. D o you think that people in the 1960s deserve the help they got?

  12. Beautiful job! I mainly focused on this statement ,”This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.”This statement make me feel like I should totally agree with you on this because President Johnson did provide these programs for the rich, poor, disable, and elderly people. Next time , you should check your grammar but other then that beautiful job! I rate your work a 2 out of 3 . Do you think these programs really still exist in the life we is living today.

    1. Beautiful job! I mainly focused on this statement ,”This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.”This statement make me feel like I should totally agree with you on this because President Johnson did provide these programs for the rich, poor, disable, and elderly people. Next time , you should check your grammar but other then that beautiful job! I rate your work a 2 out of 3 . Do you think these programs really still exist in the life we is living today.

  13. Nice work! I focused on” This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.” This grabbed my attention because it’s a good statement. This post made me feel like we are on the same page. I suggest you keep up the good work. I rated this post 3 stars. Why did you pick that title?

  14. Decent job. I would grade your essay a 2. I mainly focused on this statement, “This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.” You could have broken the quote down a little bit better, but you did good by pulling out the main idea. The government helped with medicare, medicaid and education costs. I like your choice in picture but you should have chosen a better picture that shows more detail about the topic. Next time make sure you capitalize works that need to be capital and check for punctuation errors. Do you think the “Great Society” had a positive or negative impact?

  15. Beautiful job! I mainly focused on this statement ,”This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.”This statement make me feel like I should totally agree with you on this because the poor needed help and wasn’t nobody going to do something about it. I liked your picture too. In the future, I suggest your to keep up the great work. I rate your work a 3 out of 3 . My question is: Do you think these programs really still exist in the life we is living today.

  16. Nice post! Perhaps people should look at a page in president Johnson’s book.” This statement captured my attention because it seriously mind boggled me. How did you come up with such a suggestion? Where did this piece advice even come from? Personally, I felt that your work was okay. There could be definitely improvements on your work since I stumbled upon several mistakes while reading it. One suggestion that I’d like for you to make is for you to seriously focus on grammar. To be even more specific, you need to focus on capitalization. You didn’t even capitalize proper nouns. I’d rate this post as a 1 out of a 3. Do you think there are any downsides to the acts that were passed? What are they?

  17. The post was excellent! This ALLOWS US TO SEE….The government leaders were compassionate/kind in the 60’s is precis. Because the government was focused on the needy and not themselves. Also i say that because it was precis during this time the government helped the poor united states citizens by creating programs such as food stamps. The legislation used money wisely and helped out more. For instance this made me feel that the government was worried about the poor because they felt like others didn’t want to help so why not. The great society establish medicare and medicaid which provide health care to the poor and to the elderly. The government had to take money form the united states to give to these programs that change a lot of peoples lives in the 1960’s. How does this text make you feel and how can you express that in your own words…..? Perhaps people should focus on the little and not the big.

  18. Respectable job! I would score your work a 1 out of 3. I mainly focused on this sentence .“This allows us to see how president Johnson legislation’s provide programs for the poor to help them out during the great society of 1960’s.In conclusion, we see a major focus on economies and change”. This statement gave me a good understanding of your point of view of the efforts that the Johnson and fellow government officials cared a lot about low income family’s. This post makes me feel confident in strength of our government. However, in the future make better grammar choices. Also, were did you get the picture from?

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *